Challenge 002 : One-shots

1) No vulgarities, disparaging comments or insults allowed.
2) No rated materials allowed.
3) Enjoy writing!(:

*Any entries or posts found with such content will be removed without further notice.
And, any who breaks rules 1 and 2 will be BLACKLISTED.

Challenge:
Title: Any
Feat.: DBSK/Super Junior/F.T. Island(At least one of the protagonist should be them.)
Genre: Romance/Friendship
Reward: Reviews! *winks*
Deadline for submission of entries: 15/12/2008
Citeria: Only one-shots allowed for this challenge; All entries to be posted on Winglin.

As you can see, the deadline for submission of entries is 15th Dec 2008, you must meet it. But you can have till 20th to complete it. Results will be out on the 31st!

As for rewards, it is similar to that of Challenge 001, all entries will be given a title of bronze, silver, gold etc. Also you may stand to win the champion, or runner-ups!

Champion:
First runner-up:
Second runner-up:
Most appealing fanfiction:
Most creative fanfiction:
Most popular fanfiction:

So, do enter our writing contest! You can get free reviews! This is such a good chance to improve your writing and challenge yourself! *grins*

To apply,

PROCESS:
1) If you're interested to take part, please send an email to ambiguous_abyss@hotmail.com or leave a post here in the following format.

Name:
Email:
Url:
Length of story: one-shot/two-shots/short story/novel etc
Extras:

2) I will reply to your message to double confirm with you.
3) I will post your entry here. I will provide the link too. Readers can read your entries here or in your fanfic account.
4) At the end of the contest, I will do a review for each entry. Results will be based on the reviews.

Reviewing rubric:

Forewords: /10
Writing Style: /10
Flow of story: /10
Characters: /5
Creativity & Originality: /20
Story plotting & Organisation: /15
Language: /20
Enjoyment: /10
Bonus: /5

Enter soon!

Good luck and all the best to all participants!

P.S. Please include "A-A Challenge" somewhere in your title.

A Warm Goodbye

Do you have the heart to let go someone you truly treasure?
The heart to forgive and forget..
The heart to sacrifice you own happiness for that special someone..
Even though you know..
You might lose that special someone..
Not just for now but..
Forever...
Just because...
You want him or her to live life the fullest..
You want that special someone to live grandest with rich and fame,
So that, that sweetheart of yours don't have to suffer poverty and hardship like you have too..
So that he or she could always smile not thinking anything else that you have too...
But only to smile and to laugh like theres no more tomorrow...
Although the consequences means that eventually you have to suffer in the end..
Alone and all by yourself..
Have you ever wonder how your life is without him or her as the source of your hope to a new beginning..
The source of your strength and the source of warmth when you're feeling cold...
When the sky seems so dark and hollow,
When the daylight shines the slightest in your world,
Not letting you feel the warmth and let you shivers in the freezing breeze,
And when everything in life seems to turn their back on you,
You look behind but to your despair..
There's no one behind you to lend you a helping hand..
To lend you some hopes and maybe even some loves..
To care for you in this cruel world you live in..
I have been through all this. So this is my story, my life, my love and my suffer..
Do you know the feeling to grow up in a family full with hardship and torments.
Your caring father cared for no one but his greed,
Your mother for some reason leaves you alone in this world,
You yourself lost yourself in the numbness of isolation..

They called me names,
They treat me as if I was a sin,
A mistake and even a trash,
They spit me with words that makes my heart bleed,
They beat me up as if I am someone worthless and not worth living,
"What have ever did to them?" my heart cried.
cried so much until no tears of blood could shed,
alas making my warm heart freeze and eventually died.
I'm now a lifeless person, with no feeling nor expression.
I'd care for no one but only me,
My father died in a car accident, it broke my heart but,
Did I shed a tear for his death? No!
No one did. They don't ever bother to come and say that they felt sorry for his death but instead,
They're happy cause the crazy Kim died.
The greedy and alcoholic Kim died.
I sigh, is this the world that I have to go through my entire life.

Then the shark loaners my father borrowed came and search for me,
They came and they beat me to death,
Then they go swiftly like it was not a big deal,
Not a big deal at all,
I bleed and broke few ribs here and there,
It was dreadful but it wasn't as hurtful as how my heart feels,
It wasn't as dreadful as my how heart cries,
every night and day..

Then in the darkness of the night,
Someone came to the rescue, he called my names,
but did I responds? No! I was too tired too say anything..
Even too tired to open my eyes. I feel so sleepy, like I could sleep forever..
I heard someone calling my name, 'Why is someone calling me from far?' I wonder.
'Then why is everything so dark? Who turn off the light??'
I set sail with the dreamy voice as the whispering winds.

The day I woke up is the day I saw my angel!
Is he the one who rescued me? Is he the one for me?
No~ I must be dreaming. I try to shrug my head but it hurts so much just to make a slightest move.
"Jae! You've awake!" I heard someone called me.
I try to looked at him but my sight is so blurry and oh how I wonder why my angel is so far away from me.
Then everything turn dark like before.

I woke up again only seeing numerous light here and there.
It hurt my eyes,
'Why is this place so bright?' Am I in heaven?
I try to wake up but I feel so sleepy.. So drowsy indeed.
Then I feel a warm hand gripping my palm.
Interlocked my finger with his.
until I feel so warm, really warm to enjoy this slumber sleep forever.

Again I woke up,
It wasn't as blurry as before, and I can see everything crystal clear!
I thought of seeing someone again, and I did.
I really did! My hero! My savior! My shining knight!
It sounds like a girl but I don't care, I'm really happy to see him again.
Just to see him smiling at me makes me feel like a butterfly in a garden,
Everything is so calm, peaceful and as if I am in the land of wonders,
Everything seems too perfect, to be true....

"Jae, thanked God you've awake! You've make me really scared!" words slips from my knights lips.
'He looks so perfect!' I smiled.
"Jae, come and stay with me! I'll take care of you!" he said smiling at me.
I smiled at him knowing how dreams are really that magical.
"Jae, saranghae." a simple word but it make my heart stop beating for a while.
'Is this true???' I wonder but nothing did pass through my lips since I feel as if my lips are sealed.

The next day he greet me again with his killer smile,
I did blushed countless time.
He stayed by me. He really did. He let me stay in his home. He sang for me. He dance for me. He even kissed me.
Am I in heaven?' How could an angel bestowed upon me?
A hideous creature like me could never possesses an angel so perfect like him.

Everyday my life shines. He's like a sun,
warming me and kept me save from the blistering winds,
He enlighten my days with smiles you could never see so pure and so innocent,
I feel so save with him, indeed so save and loved.
He never showed me any worries but somehow that made me worried,
How can he lives a life so happy and problem free?
What does his parents say about me?
Do they know my existence?
Do they like me? I wonder...

Then one day all my questions are answered.
I've just return from the shop nearby,
I heard a female and a male middle aged voice in our house,
'It must be he's parents!'
I blushed with the thought I'm finally going to see his parents,
But what I heard shattered my heart into thousand pieces,

"Jung Yunho! You can't be serious? You're in love with a guy?
You are my only son, you can't be serious! That guy that you so in love with came from a bad background!
I won't allow you Yunho. Don't try to play games with me, Yunho!
You'll going to marry with Yeonhee whether you like it or not!"

'So his name is Yunho, Jung Yunho, my knight name's is Yunho' I smiled at the thought.
Although it had been months I live here never did I know his name,
but unfortunately for me,
my dreamland is over,
I quietly ran out from our house, no.. his house,
letting his parents return home first before returning back,
Knowing the truth, it really broke my heart seeing the smiling Yunho back,
'How can he act as if nothing happen?'
I feel so sad at my selfishness,
not saying a word to him but only to look and smile,
whereas he suffer the pain of being humiliated by his parents just because of me..
'Am I worthy for all that? I shrug my head.

The next day, Yunho leaves me alone because he got some errands to do.
I didn't mind but then again I said nothing but only smile at him,
After a slight peck near my forehead he vanished from this warm house,
"Yunho..." I smiled at myself and head to his recording room.
I insert a tape in his video cam and start recording.
At first I was blushing madly but after a few while words slips through my mouth..

"Yun.. Yunho. Hi.. I'm so nervous now." I giggled at myself.
"Yun aa, you have a very nice name, Jung Yunho.. It.. ahmm.. suites you well" I paused and smile at the recording camera.
"Yun aa, after you see this tape, (I looked down at the ground and looked back up trying to take a deep breath before continuing my mission) you'll not be seeing me anymore." i smiled half-heartedly.
"Before I take my leave, I want to sing back and and reply your song, the song that you sang to me every night as a token of my appreciation to you. My voice is not that nice and this is the first time I'm singing but its the least I could do. I've completed your song. Hope you liked it if you don't you could throw(gulp) it away."

"Those freezing hands aren't your fault
They carry scars from long before
Afraid to love someone,
You turn your back on the other side of the words...

Like ice, the embraced heart slowly starts to thaw

For anyone to be loved by someone,
Makes life in this world shine
If it was me, I’d make your heart warm once more
With eternal tenderness

Even if fate’s games hurt the heart...
On the other side of the tears,
A single ray of light will swoop down into the darkness
We know that this is so

As strong as the suffering, we can feel people’s warmth

Everyone is searching for a place
That can take away the sorrow and loneliness
So… for you, that place is here
Don’t be afraid, don’t hesitate anymore, because I’ll protect you

To the point of being painful (my heart)
This love is beautiful (don’t be afraid)
Even if just momentarily (let you know my love)
This time is beautiful (you know… let you know my love)"

I smiled at myself and at the camera.

"Yun aa, I think Love in the Ice is the best title for this song. You're a great composer, Yun! I hope you will have a happy life and get married to someone and have kids together." there was a paused.
I couldn't say it anymore. It's hurting me but I must.
"Yun, take care of yourself. Thank you so much for giving such a warm smile, a tender kiss and a song for me to sing too. You've make my world warm and worth living Yun." tears start dripping from my face.
"Yun, I'm emo right now. Haha.. ( wipes my tears) Yunho, you are the song in my life.. You bring colors to the plain black and white of my world. Saranghae Yun.. You're the best guy a friend could ever have. I'll treasure the memories we have together Yun! I promise! You're voice will be the song in my heart and the melody to make me sleep. I pray for your happiness from far Yun. I will! Thank you!" I bowed down and run quickly to the camera ending the recording. I couldn't hold these dripping tears anymore..

'Yunho, I wish you have the best life! Saranghae~ Mani mani saranghae~ Why must I lose you when I'm already falling for you?' my heart cries.

Then I put the video recorder near the dining table with a note...

Dear Yunho,

when you find this I'll be long gone. Thanks for your hospitality and warmth! Now, its time for me to leave, to give you space for you to live with your love ones. Ah~ Congrats, with your up- coming marriage. Yun, if you have free time, please think of me sometimes as I will always will Yun!

Loved x0x0xo,

Kim Jaejoong....\(^_^)/

With that, I walked away from that house.
No longer feeling the need to look back because there are so many memories inside this heart of mine.
Yunho, you've bring colors to this dull life of mine but I've bring scars inside that warm heart of yours, Yunho. I should leave now before I worsen the scars. Mianhaeyo..

I walk ahead. Feeling all fluffy inside with the thought that I've just sang for Yunho but then when I think back that he's no longer stay beside me singing for me, tears start dripping helplessly.

"Yunho, be happy for me! As long as you smile, I'm happy too although I can never see or touch you anymore! You're memories will always keep me warm!" i said out loud and start a new page in my life....

A better and more warmer page~

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