http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/feed/? Latest topics Tue, 24 Feb 2009 09:42:23 GMT 10 http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q64/lavender_rawks/49-2.jpg http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/feed/? http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/shards-of-ice-savior86-t54.htm miss lovie Title: Shards of Ice Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/soi Author: savior86 Reviewer: miss lovie @ ambiguousabyss.blogspot.com DISCLAIMER: Review given by the reviewer might be harsh, but no insults or disparaging comments intended. Title: 8/10 This is interesting. I like the way you describe their broken marriage as broken ice – cold and beyond hope. Forewords: 5.5/10 You’re simply giving the readers an idea of what the story is going to be about, but definitely ... Reviews Tue, 24 Feb 2009 09:42:23 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/shards-of-ice-savior86-t54.htm#165 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/shards-of-ice-savior86-t54.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/forsaken-love-celestine-blue-t53.htm miss lovie Title: Forsaken Love Author: Celestine Blue ^-^ Url: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/evelyn_blue2/ Reviewer: Anna @ambiguous abyss Warning: The reviewer doesn’t have anything against the Author. This is only an honest review, so don’t be mad if there are any unpleasant comments. Title: 7.5/10 The title is okay. I would say that it is understandable in a way, and also blooming. But as a suggestion, it would be better if you put more meaning into the title. Forewords: ... Reviews Mon, 16 Feb 2009 10:22:19 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/forsaken-love-celestine-blue-t53.htm#164 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/forsaken-love-celestine-blue-t53.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/tvxq-dbsk-i-got-you-under-my-skin-f6/no-key-brothers-hahaha-song-t44.htm miss lovie have you seen yunho and yoochun in these ad? they are so funny! damn hilarious that i could not stop laughing the moment i see those videos kawaii neh! haha xD To be frank, my favourite is the first one. The way Yunho pulled Yoochun's 'armpit hair' was way too HILARIOUS! The others were cute too!xD Enjoy! TVXQ/DBSK : I got you under my skin. (: Sun, 04 Jan 2009 12:39:20 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/tvxq-dbsk-i-got-you-under-my-skin-f6/no-key-brothers-hahaha-song-t44.htm#116 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/tvxq-dbsk-i-got-you-under-my-skin-f6/no-key-brothers-hahaha-song-t44.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/tvxq-dbsk-i-got-you-under-my-skin-f6/uproar-in-korea-mirotic-lyrics-contains-sexual-content-t32.htm miss lovie When I saw this online I went like =.= I really don't know what to say. Here are some articles. - After judging that Rain’s Rainism was harmful and detrimental to youths last week, the Commission of Youth Protection has acted again by labelling DBSK’s Mirotic, Solbi’s Do It Do It, Trust Me and Make Up Sex from Dynamic Duo’s 4th album, etc in the same category as Rainism. This has created an uproar once again in Korea with the ruling taking effect from this week onwards. According ... TVXQ/DBSK : I got you under my skin. (: Fri, 12 Dec 2008 13:18:46 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/tvxq-dbsk-i-got-you-under-my-skin-f6/uproar-in-korea-mirotic-lyrics-contains-sexual-content-t32.htm#82 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/tvxq-dbsk-i-got-you-under-my-skin-f6/uproar-in-korea-mirotic-lyrics-contains-sexual-content-t32.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/review-request-unavailable-t12.htm miss lovie UNAVAILABLE. Rules & Regulation / Review Request/ Review Status Sun, 30 Nov 2008 13:43:19 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/review-request-unavailable-t12.htm#15 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/review-request-unavailable-t12.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/too-nice-ilee-t52.htm miss lovie Title: Too nice Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/TooNice Author: ILEE Reviewer: miss lovie @ ambiguousabyss.blogspot.com DISCLAIMER: Review given by the reviewer might be harsh, but no insults or disparaging comments intended. Title: 5/10 This title is way too neutral and emotionless. This is a big NO-NO. It reflects nothing, and obviously, you can’t expect too much a reaction from your readers. Though it fits your story NICELY but it’s just plain boring. Forewords: ... Reviews Mon, 09 Feb 2009 12:18:36 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/too-nice-ilee-t52.htm#160 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/too-nice-ilee-t52.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/faith-banana-t51.htm miss lovie Title: ~Faith~ Author: jes_banana Url: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/jes_banana1/ Reviewer: Death God @ Ambiguous Abyss DISCLAIMER: Review done might be harash, but with no intention to offend anyone. Title: 5/10 I don't see a link between the title, and the story plot. Maybe, it's because your's story is just beginning to build up. However, the title itself ain't attractive enough to arouse my attention to read on. So, I hope to see more link between the title and the plot ... Reviews Sun, 08 Feb 2009 12:47:52 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/faith-banana-t51.htm#159 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/faith-banana-t51.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/culmination-heartsong-t50.htm miss lovie Title: Culmination Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/Culmination Author: heartsong Reviewer: miss lovie @ ambiguousabyss.blogspot.com DISCLAIMER: Review given by the reviewer might be harsh, but no insults or disparaging comments intended. Title: 8.5/10 Yes, I like this. It is short, yet it is capable of capturing of my attention. Moreover, this is quite rarely seen as a one-word title. So, good job. Forewords: 6.5/10 You would have gotten 7 or 7.5 if you shorten this. ... Reviews Sun, 08 Feb 2009 12:46:31 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/culmination-heartsong-t50.htm#158 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/culmination-heartsong-t50.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/in-a-blink-eve-earl-t49.htm miss lovie Title: In A Blink Author: Eve Earl Url: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/evearlmine/ Reviewer: Anna @ambiguous abyss Warning: The reviewer doesn’t have anything against the Author. This is only an honest review, so don’t be mad if there are any unpleasant comments. Title: 10/10 At first, I was kind of intrigued. I simply love the title. In a blink, things can change Forewords: 6/10 The introduction was short and vague. I suggest you to elaborate more of the ... Reviews Tue, 27 Jan 2009 14:54:47 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/in-a-blink-eve-earl-t49.htm#157 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/in-a-blink-eve-earl-t49.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/eternally-frozen-ikang-t48.htm miss lovie Title: Eternally Frozen Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/ikang4 Author: ikang Reviewer: miss lovie @ ambiguousabyss.blogspot.com DISCLAIMER: Review given by the reviewer might be harsh, but no insults or disparaging comments intended. Title: 9/10 I’m impressed by this title. There’s this skillful use of the technique, imagery, which means to create an image, with just your title. I can imagine an old photo, which seems to capture something eternally frozen. Forewords: ... Reviews Fri, 23 Jan 2009 15:17:56 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/eternally-frozen-ikang-t48.htm#156 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/eternally-frozen-ikang-t48.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/super-junior-f7/which-mini-drama-show-would-you-recommend-t30.htm miss lovie Recommend us some!xD]]> Super Junior Thu, 11 Dec 2008 06:11:33 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/super-junior-f7/which-mini-drama-show-would-you-recommend-t30.htm#65 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/super-junior-f7/which-mini-drama-show-would-you-recommend-t30.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/mister-and-miss-_steph_-t47.htm miss lovie Title: Mister and Miss Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/biscuitmonster Author: _Steph_ Reviewer: miss lovie @ ambiguousabyss.blogspot.com DISCLAIMER: Review given by the reviewer might be harsh, but no insults or disparaging comments intended. Title: 7/10 I thought it sounds really cute. Of course, it entices me to click on your story. However, please take note that it lacks x-factor which will catch the readers’ attention immediately. Forewords: -/10 I understand ... Reviews Fri, 16 Jan 2009 12:52:12 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/mister-and-miss-_steph_-t47.htm#154 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/mister-and-miss-_steph_-t47.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/secret-santa-a-very-late-christmas-present-xfactor-t46.htm miss lovie Title: Secret Santa : A Very Late Christmas Present Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/ixie1504 Author: Xfactor Reviewer: miss lovie@ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com DISCLAIMER: Review given by the reviewer might be harsh, but no insults or disparaging comments intended. Title: 7/10 I admit that this title caught my attention when I first clicked on your request. Wells, it emits an aura of mysteriousness because it sets me thinking - what the present would be. However, I thought that ... Reviews Fri, 16 Jan 2009 12:50:48 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/secret-santa-a-very-late-christmas-present-xfactor-t46.htm#153 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/secret-santa-a-very-late-christmas-present-xfactor-t46.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/super-junior-f7/welcome-the-cutest-band-super-junior-t26.htm miss lovie Another favourite group of mine! Hmm personally I like Hankyung the best. Kibum too. Kang In too. (Can't decide!) hees. P.S. No polls because there is only a max. no. options of 10! Super Junior Fri, 05 Dec 2008 05:01:43 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/super-junior-f7/welcome-the-cutest-band-super-junior-t26.htm#39 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/super-junior-f7/welcome-the-cutest-band-super-junior-t26.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/tvxq-dbsk-i-got-you-under-my-skin-f6/here-comes-dbsk-tvxq-darlings-xd-t23.htm miss lovie They are the hottest band ever!! *screams* Especially yunho. OMG OMG OMG jsut look at him! his hair, his clothes, his LONG LONG tie.. EVERYTHING about him is just soooooo PERFECT. ZOMG I'm NOT in the mood to review... I think I can just stare at him for hours... *in a daze* - haha come on, tell me who's your favourite? share more about him okays? hees. TVXQ/DBSK : I got you under my skin. (: Wed, 03 Dec 2008 15:07:30 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/tvxq-dbsk-i-got-you-under-my-skin-f6/here-comes-dbsk-tvxq-darlings-xd-t23.htm#32 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/tvxq-dbsk-i-got-you-under-my-skin-f6/here-comes-dbsk-tvxq-darlings-xd-t23.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/tvxq-dbsk-i-got-you-under-my-skin-f6/i-love-jung-yunho-caution-hot-guy-from-oven-t25.htm miss lovie My biggest love, JUNG YUNHO! Seriously, I have never been so crazy over a guy before! He's so irresistable! *____* he can be HOT KAWAII CHARISMATIC all at the same time! - ZOMG look at this picture! He's topless... *blushes* Wells I'm lucky that I'm not there if not, I would have fainted. xD (will share more pictures some day later) TVXQ/DBSK : I got you under my skin. (: Thu, 04 Dec 2008 15:27:42 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/tvxq-dbsk-i-got-you-under-my-skin-f6/i-love-jung-yunho-caution-hot-guy-from-oven-t25.htm#35 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/tvxq-dbsk-i-got-you-under-my-skin-f6/i-love-jung-yunho-caution-hot-guy-from-oven-t25.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/destined-blood-savior86-blackespirit-t45.htm miss lovie Title: Destined Blood Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/d_b Author: savior86 & blackespirit Reviewer: miss lovie@ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com DISCLAIMER: Review given by the reviewer might be harsh, but no insults or disparaging comments intended. Title: 7.5/10 Oh yes, this sounds interesting. It catches my attention because I love dark fictions and I have a feeling it’s going to be exciting, and perhaps a little melancholic. Forewords: 8/10 I was really interested ... Reviews Sat, 10 Jan 2009 10:34:23 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/destined-blood-savior86-blackespirit-t45.htm#133 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/destined-blood-savior86-blackespirit-t45.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/don-t-say-goodbye-miss-lovie-t43.htm miss lovie Title: Don’t say goodbye Author: Miss Lovie Url: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/saygoodbye/ Reviewer: Anna @ambiguous abyss Warning: The reviewer doesn’t have anything against the Author. This is only an honest review, so don’t be mad if there are any unpleasant comments. Title: 9.5/10 It’s something that really catch my eyes. While I was checking this out, I thought maybe the title can be ‘Never say goodbye’? But drop that, I still like the original title ... Reviews Sun, 04 Jan 2009 12:28:01 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/don-t-say-goodbye-miss-lovie-t43.htm#115 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/don-t-say-goodbye-miss-lovie-t43.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/j-dean-ms-j-dean-t42.htm miss lovie Title: J Dean Author: Ms J Dean Url: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/JDean/ Reviewer: Anna @ambiguous abyss Warning: The reviewer doesn’t have anything against the Author. This is only an honest review, so don’t be mad if there are any unpleasant comments. Title: 7.5/10 It doesn’t really give me some effect with your title. But after seeing your poster, maybe it does have something. Two names become one? Nice, I love it ^__^. Maybe you can add in something so that ... Reviews Tue, 30 Dec 2008 02:02:30 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/j-dean-ms-j-dean-t42.htm#109 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/j-dean-ms-j-dean-t42.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/shotgun-wedding-xfactor-t41.htm miss lovie Title: Shotgun Wedding Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/XtremeWeddings Author: Xfactor Reviewer: miss lovie @ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com DISCLAIMER: Harsh review ahead, but no insults of disparaging comments intended. Title: 6/10 This is too plain. As what the readers can interpret from your title, anyone would have thought that you’re talking about shotgun wedding(even if it’s not the case). This would be a serious problem because you would be unable to catch their attention ... Reviews Sat, 27 Dec 2008 14:30:08 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/shotgun-wedding-xfactor-t41.htm#108 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/shotgun-wedding-xfactor-t41.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/adventure-escape-miss-emergency-t40.htm miss lovie Title: Adventure/Escape Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/missemergency Author: Miss Emergency Reviewer: miss lovie@ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com DISCLAIMER: Harsh review ahead, but no insults or disparaging comments intended. Title: 5/10 It sounds like a genre more than a title. If it’s meant to be a title of a thriller, it is too plain and uninteresting. However, to my surprise, I realised that it’s supposed to be some kind of ‘adventure’ exploring the element of love. No ... Reviews Sat, 27 Dec 2008 13:32:10 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/adventure-escape-miss-emergency-t40.htm#107 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/adventure-escape-miss-emergency-t40.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/silence-zaire-t39.htm miss lovie Title: Silence Author: Zaire Url: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Silence_Z/ Reviewer: Death God @ Ambiguous Abyss Title: 8.5/10 Good choice of title, which totally links up with the plot. I like how thing/plot are closely related, to the title itself. Short and sweet, which totally make it easy to remember at one glance. The title itself, tells a story. (That's the case for me, Just some random thoughts) However, it's not that attractive enough to arouse my attention if I happen ... Reviews Mon, 22 Dec 2008 14:03:27 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/silence-zaire-t39.htm#106 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/silence-zaire-t39.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/suggestions-t2.htm miss lovie Thanks! (:]]> Rules & Regulation / Review Request/ Review Status Thu, 27 Nov 2008 13:25:52 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/suggestions-t2.htm#2 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/suggestions-t2.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/scandal-shepardlover-t37.htm miss lovie Title: Scandal Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/shepardlover1 Author: Shepardlover Reviewer: miss lovie@ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com Title: -/10 Not available, because this is a challenge title. Forewords: 5/10 A two-liner summary is only enough to catch one’s attention for a little while, which I strongly discourage, considering that you have to keep your readers till the next update. I would have preferred it if you had included a prologue or an excerpt of the climax, instead ... Reviews Thu, 18 Dec 2008 14:04:59 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/scandal-shepardlover-t37.htm#103 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/scandal-shepardlover-t37.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/his-key-of-heart-pink-princess-t35.htm miss lovie Title: His Key of Heart Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/PinkPrincess Author: PinkPrincess Reviewer: miss lovie@ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com Note: This is a re-review of this story, thus the review given will be written based on the areas of improvement the author has made. However, no marks will be given. Title: Yes, I like this title. Like what I have said earlier, it gives me a sweet feeling. Forewords: Oh, I like this. This is lovely. Though it isn’t exactly intriguing ... Reviews Wed, 17 Dec 2008 14:37:20 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/his-key-of-heart-pink-princess-t35.htm#101 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/his-key-of-heart-pink-princess-t35.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/i-m-with-you-banana-t34.htm miss lovie Title: I’m with you Author: Jes.banana Url: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/jes_banana/ Reviewer: Anna @ambiguous abyss Warning: The reviewer doesn’t have anything against the Author. This is only an honest review, so don’t be mad if there are any unpleasant comments. Title: 8.5/10 The title reminds me of certain things where a person is always with somebody. “I’m with you” it gives me a meaning that a person is assuring someone he/she loves. Telling them not ... Reviews Wed, 17 Dec 2008 13:37:19 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/i-m-with-you-banana-t34.htm#100 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/i-m-with-you-banana-t34.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/super-junior-f7/lyrics-request-t31.htm miss lovie This is kinda inspired by my own laziness
I want the korean lyrics but I'm lazy to find!
I wonder if anyone is willing to share...?
hehes!
Alright let me start this off

LYRICS OF "SO I" please!

P.S. korean, romanization and english for everyone's convenience!xD]]> Super Junior Fri, 12 Dec 2008 12:55:43 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/super-junior-f7/lyrics-request-t31.htm#80 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/super-junior-f7/lyrics-request-t31.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/one-day-in-rome-one-night-in-singapore-t33.htm miss lovie Title: One Day In Rome, One Night In Singapore Url: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/rome_singapore Reviewer: Death God @ Ambiguous Abyss Title: 7.5/10 Your title matches very well with your story, which reveal much about the story plot. However, something bugs me about the title. It was a little lengthy, which make it hard for people to remember well. No offence to this, as I'm a lover of short story title. But, each has different view. Forewords: 7/10 A refreshing start, ... Reviews Sun, 14 Dec 2008 04:28:37 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/one-day-in-rome-one-night-in-singapore-t33.htm#87 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/one-day-in-rome-one-night-in-singapore-t33.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/tvxq-dbsk-i-got-you-under-my-skin-f6/yunjae-jaeho-aren-t-they-sweet-together-hehes-t24.htm miss lovie Aww~ Just look at them! Aren't they sweet..? They are really compatible... Sometimes, I really wonder if they are... GAYS..? It's not that I'm biased against gays or anything.. but I think many girls will be heartbroken if they are! There are simply too many evidence to prove this! Share some with us, if you have! hahaxD --- Anyway do share some nice YAOI fanfictions here too! P.S. If you don't mind, do check out mine If Only You Knew TVXQ/DBSK : I got you under my skin. (: Thu, 04 Dec 2008 15:17:34 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/tvxq-dbsk-i-got-you-under-my-skin-f6/yunjae-jaeho-aren-t-they-sweet-together-hehes-t24.htm#34 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/tvxq-dbsk-i-got-you-under-my-skin-f6/yunjae-jaeho-aren-t-they-sweet-together-hehes-t24.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/criminal-and-inspector-crystal_03-t28.htm miss lovie Title: Criminal and Inspector Author: Crystal Princess Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/Crystal_03 Reviewer: miss lovie @ambiguousabyss.blogspot.com DICLAIMER: Harsh review ahead. No insults nor disparaging comments intended. Title: 5/10 This is definitely not catchy. And, from the title, you can tell what’s the whole plot about, which is a big NO-NO. You should try to come up with a title relevant to vengeance, but don’t reveal the plot. Forewords: 7/10 It’s ... Reviews Mon, 08 Dec 2008 07:14:20 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/criminal-and-inspector-crystal_03-t28.htm#48 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/criminal-and-inspector-crystal_03-t28.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/tarnished-sleepiidreamer-t27.htm miss lovie Title: Tarnished Author: SleepiiDreamer Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/twm Reviewer: miss lovie@ambiguousabyss.blogspot.com Disclaimer: Harsh review ahead. But, no insults or disparaging comments intended. Title: -/10 Not applicable because this is a writing challenge. Nevertheless, I like it. It gives me a melancholic feeling. Forewords: 8/10 This is excellent. It grabbed my attention. I love the way you drew me into the story. I felt as though I was JaeJoong, ... Reviews Sun, 07 Dec 2008 14:36:45 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/tarnished-sleepiidreamer-t27.htm#47 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/tarnished-sleepiidreamer-t27.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/reviewers-view-their-profiles-here-t22.htm miss lovie Name: Miss Lovie Email: - Birthdate:16/9 Fanfictions:Mr P.S.P. Mr Dolphin If only you knew Awards: Rules & Regulation / Review Request/ Review Status Wed, 03 Dec 2008 15:00:41 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/reviewers-view-their-profiles-here-t22.htm#31 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/reviewers-view-their-profiles-here-t22.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/fanfictions-f1/mr-dolphin-feat-xiah-kim-jun-su-last-update-1-12-08-t13.htm miss lovie PROLOGUE Sinking my teeth into the apple in my palm, I shut my eyes lightly and enjoyed every tint of its fragrance. Yes, this is it. He smells just like apples. I miss this smell. - Okay I have posted up my fanfic, as an example. So, if there are readers, you can comment by leaving a post to support the writer.(: Hope to see more fanfictions around! *grins* Fanfictions Mon, 01 Dec 2008 13:37:41 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/fanfictions-f1/mr-dolphin-feat-xiah-kim-jun-su-last-update-1-12-08-t13.htm#17 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/fanfictions-f1/mr-dolphin-feat-xiah-kim-jun-su-last-update-1-12-08-t13.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/friends-meet-again-ikang-t21.htm miss lovie Title: Friends Meet Again Author: ikang Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/ikang2 Reviewer: miss lovie@ambiguousabyss.blogspot.com Title: 6/10 This is sort of boring, not catchy enough. However it gives me a feeling of nostalgia, without knowing why. Forewords: 3.5/10 This is too short to be able to sustain your readers’ interest. You may want to add in a short character introduction for this case, because it’s a one-shot, without many excerpts to choose from. Poster ... Reviews Wed, 03 Dec 2008 14:07:19 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/friends-meet-again-ikang-t21.htm#29 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/friends-meet-again-ikang-t21.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/request-status-update-15-02-09-t19.htm miss lovie PENDING LIST miss lovie Shards of Ice Death God | Hiatus School Lock-In Just Everyday Situation, Yeah, Right xXSkyliteXx | Hiatus Culmination If Only You Knew Too Nice Anna Forsaken Love XiaoAi Pending Rules & Regulation / Review Request/ Review Status Tue, 02 Dec 2008 06:46:36 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/request-status-update-15-02-09-t19.htm#24 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/request-status-update-15-02-09-t19.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/his-key-of-heart-pink-princess-t18.htm miss lovie Title: His Key of Heart Author: Pink Princess Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/PinkPrincess Reviewer: Lovie@ambiguousabyss.blogspot.com Title: 7.5/10 I like your title. It’s special because it gives me a sweet feeling, as though the male lead is waiting for someone special who has the key to his heart. Forewords: 1/10 This is quite disappointing. I was expecting a prologue of some kind, may it be excerpts or character introduction. I would suggest that you include a small ... Reviews Tue, 02 Dec 2008 06:05:33 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/his-key-of-heart-pink-princess-t18.htm#22 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/his-key-of-heart-pink-princess-t18.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/test-of-love-qiaokeli-t15.htm miss lovie Title: Test of Love Author: QiaoKeLi Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/cremecaramel Reviewer: Lovie@ambiguousabyss.blogspot.com Disclaimer: Warning. Harsh review ahead. But, no insults or disparaging comments to author is intended. Title: 5/10 One look at it tells me that this is going to be quite a typical story on the two protagonists overcoming many obstacles in their love life, as suggested by the word ‘test’. This is definitely not interesting enough to be able to ... Reviews Tue, 02 Dec 2008 04:21:39 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/test-of-love-qiaokeli-t15.htm#19 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/test-of-love-qiaokeli-t15.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/mystery-phonecalls-shineeforever-t14.htm miss lovie Title: Mystery Phonecalls Author: SHINeeFORever Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/LoveForever Reviewer: Lovie@ambiguousabyss.blogspot.com DISCLAIMER: Warning. Harsh review ahead. But, there is no insults or disparaging comments intended. Title: 6/10 Yes, this does sounds interesting. I’m interested to know what’s going to happen next. But somehow, ‘Missed Calls’ came into my mind. Is it a murder case too? And, it should be ‘Mysterious Phone Calls’. It’s incorrect ... Reviews Mon, 01 Dec 2008 14:54:04 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/mystery-phonecalls-shineeforever-t14.htm#18 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/mystery-phonecalls-shineeforever-t14.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/writing-challenges-f2/challenge-002-one-shots-t11.htm miss lovie 1) No vulgarities, disparaging comments or insults allowed. 2) No rated materials allowed. 3) Enjoy writing!(: *Any entries or posts found with such content will be removed without further notice. And, any who breaks rules 1 and 2 will be BLACKLISTED. Challenge: Title: Any Feat.: DBSK/Super Junior/F.T. Island(At least one of the protagonist should be them.) Genre: Romance/Friendship Reward: Reviews! *winks* Deadline for submission of entries: 15/12/2008 Citeria: Only ... Writing challenges Sun, 30 Nov 2008 13:25:47 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/writing-challenges-f2/challenge-002-one-shots-t11.htm#14 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/writing-challenges-f2/challenge-002-one-shots-t11.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/writing-challenges-f2/writing-challenge-001-you-re-my-only-source-of-warmth-t8.htm miss lovie RULES: 1) No plagarism. 2) I don't appreciate any insults or disparaging comments (inlcuding vulgarities) given with regards to entries or this contest. 3) It’s not compulsory to have a poster. But it would definitely be better if you have one. 4) Enjoy writing! **Anyone who breaks rules 1 and 2 will be BLACKLISTED without further notice. PROCESS: 1) If you're interested to take part, please send an email to ambiguous_abyss@hotmail.com in the following format. Name: Email: Url: Length ... Writing challenges Thu, 27 Nov 2008 13:45:19 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/writing-challenges-f2/writing-challenge-001-you-re-my-only-source-of-warmth-t8.htm#8 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/writing-challenges-f2/writing-challenge-001-you-re-my-only-source-of-warmth-t8.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/blacklist-caution-t9.htm miss lovie Not yet Rules & Regulation / Review Request/ Review Status Thu, 27 Nov 2008 13:51:46 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/blacklist-caution-t9.htm#9 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/blacklist-caution-t9.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/best-of-the-best-ikang-t7.htm miss lovie Title: Best of the Best Author: ikang Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/ikang2 Reviewer: Miss Lovie@ambiguousabyss.blogspot.com Title: 7/10 I like it because one look at it tells me that its genre is not romance, but friendship or kinship etc. This makes it different from the cliché titles out there on the Winglin webpage. Forewords: 5/10 This is not exactly attractive, not enough to sustain a reader’s interest for a period of time if you’re going to take some days ... Reviews Thu, 27 Nov 2008 13:40:44 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/best-of-the-best-ikang-t7.htm#7 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/best-of-the-best-ikang-t7.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/love-in-the-snow-cinderella_suju-t6.htm miss lovie Title: Love in the Snow Author: Cinderella ^^ Reviewer: Miss Lovie@ambiguousabyss.blogspot.com Title: 6.5/10 I like the title because it does sound romantic. Not knowing why, an image of “Winter Sonata” appeared in my mind when I first your title. It gives a sweet feeling, yet it’s a little cliché. Forewords: 3/10 You failed this criterion because you did not include prologue of any kind. Character introduction is definitely not enough to absorb your readers into ... Reviews Thu, 27 Nov 2008 13:32:51 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/love-in-the-snow-cinderella_suju-t6.htm#6 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/love-in-the-snow-cinderella_suju-t6.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/happily-ever-after-rina-t5.htm miss lovie Title: Happily ever after?! Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/bean00 Reviewed by: Miss Lovie @ Ambiguous Abyss Title: 3.5/10 You should know why you failed this criterion. Failed to interest me. This works the same way as when any other person is scrolling down the website. Your title would not be that appealing. Forewords: 1/10 I was looking through the chapters and could not find the forewords. I suppose chapter 3 is the forewords…? 1 mark for character introduction. ... Reviews Thu, 27 Nov 2008 13:30:22 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/happily-ever-after-rina-t5.htm#5 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/happily-ever-after-rina-t5.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/i-m-pale-enough-for-us-both-kanizziekuun-t4.htm miss lovie Title: I’m Pale Enough For Us Both Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/KaNizzieKuun Reviewed by: Miss Lovie @ Ambiguous Abyss Title: 7/10 Good attempt. This does sound interesting. Forewords: 5/10 I have always preferred a prologue to a summary. A summary serves to give the readers an idea of the whole story, while the prologue serves as an introduction to the story. If you were the reader, would you prefer to know the whole story, or be kept in suspense? I supposed you would ... Reviews Thu, 27 Nov 2008 13:29:11 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/i-m-pale-enough-for-us-both-kanizziekuun-t4.htm#4 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/i-m-pale-enough-for-us-both-kanizziekuun-t4.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/love-s-puzzle-pieces-wildfire-t3.htm miss lovie Title: Love’s Puzzle Pieces Url: www.winglin.net/fanfic/wildfire Reviewer: Miss Lovie @ Ambiguous Abyss Title: 7/10 It does give me a sweet feeling; love does work that way, with the help of affinity and fate. So it does seem like puzzle pieces in some way. However, it still lack of something which will really ignite sparks of interest in reader and let them go ‘o’. You have got to work on that. Forewords: 6/10 This is fine, but definitely not intriguing. It seems ... Reviews Thu, 27 Nov 2008 13:27:52 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/love-s-puzzle-pieces-wildfire-t3.htm#3 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/reviews-f4/love-s-puzzle-pieces-wildfire-t3.htm http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/rules-and-regulations-t1.htm miss lovie 1) All guests are welcomed to register as a member of our forum. 2) No vulgarities or disparaging comments are allowed. NO ONE IS TO INSULT ANYONE ELSE. 3) No rated materials allowed. Posts with such content will be removed without FURTHER NOTICE. 4) No hotlinking to other websites allowed. 5) Obey all rules, or you will be blacklisted. 6)Once again, RESPECT each other here. 7) Sit back and relax! Enjoy your visit here! (: Rules & Regulation / Review Request/ Review Status Thu, 27 Nov 2008 13:20:45 GMT http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/rules-and-regulations-t1.htm#1 http://ambiguousabyss.darkbb.com/rules-regulation-review-request-review-status-f3/rules-and-regulations-t1.htm